Thursday, November 19, 2009
1st chapter done just 2 let u know I’m about my biness
Yes I started on the other book last night. I’m trying 2 hit em twice.
Wednesday, November 18, 2009
Synopsis for ‘Another Woman’s Man’
You always want what you can’t have. With Munira Moore what she wanted just happened to e Leilani’s long-time boyfriend and father of her two children. A terrible accident will make their lives collide in more ways than either of them are prepared for. Leilani specifically asks for physical therapist Munira Moore in order to get into her head to see why this woman has the audacity to sleep with her man knowing that he has a family at home; I mean this chick is the reason she had the accident.
The light scar running down Munira’s cheek starts to tell its own story as each session goes along and Leilani realizes that this woman ever has touched her man. And the realization that her man is in love with this woman hits her harder than a mac truck. She could have handled him sleeping with her but emotionally cheating on her is way more than she could accept.
Sometimes it’s better to let the one thing you are trying to hold onto go. If you really love that person don’t you want to see them happy, even if it’s not with you?
The light scar running down Munira’s cheek starts to tell its own story as each session goes along and Leilani realizes that this woman ever has touched her man. And the realization that her man is in love with this woman hits her harder than a mac truck. She could have handled him sleeping with her but emotionally cheating on her is way more than she could accept.
Sometimes it’s better to let the one thing you are trying to hold onto go. If you really love that person don’t you want to see them happy, even if it’s not with you?
Saturday, November 14, 2009
bedtime
I swear yall my bed is the shit! I thought of another idea in my bed! It's called 'Blackmail'. Check this, what if you go outside and discover a dead body in your garbage bin with your fingerprints all over the body? What would you do? Especially if someone was framing you? That is crazy right? I will do the logistics of it later but that's what I have so far.
Friday, November 13, 2009
good query letter
Ok so in ran across this website yesterday called fictionwriters.com. I wanted to post the elements of a good query letter because once again I’m struggling to perfect it so I can send it out to potential publishers and agents. Maybe it will help you out too:
1. hook their attention
2. describe the project
3. tell them who you are
4. get them to ask for more
This is the purpose of a query letter. Make sure you don’t forget these things as well:
Give a detailed but short synopsis. Get them to crave your work. Like they have no purpose in life unless they read your shit, ya feel me! Let this be your first two paragraphs. Don’t forget to put your completed manuscript’s word count and genre (thriller, erotica, etc.). At the end of your letter make sure you offer to send sample chapters or the whole completed manuscript. Good luck!
1. hook their attention
2. describe the project
3. tell them who you are
4. get them to ask for more
This is the purpose of a query letter. Make sure you don’t forget these things as well:
Give a detailed but short synopsis. Get them to crave your work. Like they have no purpose in life unless they read your shit, ya feel me! Let this be your first two paragraphs. Don’t forget to put your completed manuscript’s word count and genre (thriller, erotica, etc.). At the end of your letter make sure you offer to send sample chapters or the whole completed manuscript. Good luck!
Thursday, November 12, 2009
I got it!
Finally I got this done! I’m sending this fire out today! Wish me luck!
Synopsis
Is it possible to delve into the mind of a rapist?
Ever since he was younger, sex has always been a part of him, consensually or not. Little girls in the Catholic school twirling around on the playground with their pigtails flapping in the muggy air enticed him until he pulled them into the darkest part of the gym, empty classroom or where ever he could be alone with them. He re-creates what a family member has done to him millions of times in his own bedroom. Now as a successful and attractive family man the past has come back to take residence again.
I did not consent to this…
Her mother warned her that this would happen. Her words echoes through her mind as she is taken from the running trail and raped. Her eyes, slowly becoming dull like death, stared into his crystal blue eyes where they permanently tattooed themselves in her memory bank. They hold a passion that even her long time boyfriend has never shown to her. Those same blue eyes become her eyes the nights that follows. She stands witness to his sick addiction through her dreams only to have those same nameless faces appear on the front pages of the newspaper under the words ‘Another Murder’. Nia’s mind, by force, becomes dark as ruined film. Those five minutes silences her soul; no one is to know even though a thick film of dirt has molded into an unbreakable armor around her. An unplanned sickness sends her to a twenty-four hour convenience store to buy of all things, a pregnancy test. Nia has never run so fast in her life as the day she runs to the abortion clinic. A Higher Power has other plans. Her baby sister, Crystal, intervenes.
Three years later a familiar stranger heads over the department Nia wants to manage. Uneasiness settles in her every time he is around but she can’t put her finger on as to why. The faces of women start to appear on the front pages and her nightmares returns but fuzzy. When her son stands next to his youngest son it looked like a mirror is placed in front of him and those five minutes once again comes flooding back full force. Nia has craved for this opportunity to come face to face with her rapist. Now that he is actually touchable she feels powerless. Sensing this he decides to play on her emotions. A game of cat and mouse ensues. One by one he takes a liking to torturing anyone close to her until the last eightball stands alone cornered. Bonnie and Clyde is shown in its truest form.
Without Consent is the psychological thriller that keeps you guessing and turning the pages to contagious characters, suspense, and a chilling plot that will have you asking, what would you do.
Synopsis
Is it possible to delve into the mind of a rapist?
Ever since he was younger, sex has always been a part of him, consensually or not. Little girls in the Catholic school twirling around on the playground with their pigtails flapping in the muggy air enticed him until he pulled them into the darkest part of the gym, empty classroom or where ever he could be alone with them. He re-creates what a family member has done to him millions of times in his own bedroom. Now as a successful and attractive family man the past has come back to take residence again.
I did not consent to this…
Her mother warned her that this would happen. Her words echoes through her mind as she is taken from the running trail and raped. Her eyes, slowly becoming dull like death, stared into his crystal blue eyes where they permanently tattooed themselves in her memory bank. They hold a passion that even her long time boyfriend has never shown to her. Those same blue eyes become her eyes the nights that follows. She stands witness to his sick addiction through her dreams only to have those same nameless faces appear on the front pages of the newspaper under the words ‘Another Murder’. Nia’s mind, by force, becomes dark as ruined film. Those five minutes silences her soul; no one is to know even though a thick film of dirt has molded into an unbreakable armor around her. An unplanned sickness sends her to a twenty-four hour convenience store to buy of all things, a pregnancy test. Nia has never run so fast in her life as the day she runs to the abortion clinic. A Higher Power has other plans. Her baby sister, Crystal, intervenes.
Three years later a familiar stranger heads over the department Nia wants to manage. Uneasiness settles in her every time he is around but she can’t put her finger on as to why. The faces of women start to appear on the front pages and her nightmares returns but fuzzy. When her son stands next to his youngest son it looked like a mirror is placed in front of him and those five minutes once again comes flooding back full force. Nia has craved for this opportunity to come face to face with her rapist. Now that he is actually touchable she feels powerless. Sensing this he decides to play on her emotions. A game of cat and mouse ensues. One by one he takes a liking to torturing anyone close to her until the last eightball stands alone cornered. Bonnie and Clyde is shown in its truest form.
Without Consent is the psychological thriller that keeps you guessing and turning the pages to contagious characters, suspense, and a chilling plot that will have you asking, what would you do.
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
help!
Now I know that I’m a talented writer if I may say so myself, but damn can a bish finish a simple synopsis! I’m for real literally I want to cry. It should not be this hard!
Sunday, November 8, 2009
Another Woman’s Man
Last night I started writing notes for my next novel Another Woman’s Man. I wrote so much I basically have the story laid out. It probably will be written just as fast as Without Consent was which was only six weeks. We’ll see! I’ll start posting some ideas in a minute.
Saturday, November 7, 2009
Almost, I promise
I know yall tired of me saying that I’m almost done with the synopsis so I can post it but fa real, fa real, I will be putting the finishing touches to it this weekend. Just trying to juggle school, writing, and a sick child. A bish needs to be getting paid for this, I’d probably would b e rich! LOL!2
Friday, November 6, 2009
epiphany
I had an epiphany last night again. I swear my bed has magical powers! That’s a whole other subject, LOL! Anywho, I got some more ideas for the book I mentioned yesterday. I don’t want the plot & conflict to be like the average book, girl finds man cheating, goes after mistress and a Jerry Springer fight breaks out, the end. No, I want some substance to it. Check this:
1. Mistress is a physical therapist
2. Girlfriend and boyfriend already has problems (of course)
3. Girlfriend knows about the alleged affair, knows all about the girl and what she does, etc.
4. You know God works in mysterious ways, right. A tragic accident happens where girlfriend has to receive physical therapy and she asks specifically for the mistress not thinking that this female could change her perspective on life, love, and herself.
5. Each takes away from the sessions more than what they expected.
6. Eventually girlfriend has a change of heart after seeing that her man is in love and happy because of mistress and is willing to give up her relationship to let him and this mistress get together.
1. Mistress is a physical therapist
2. Girlfriend and boyfriend already has problems (of course)
3. Girlfriend knows about the alleged affair, knows all about the girl and what she does, etc.
4. You know God works in mysterious ways, right. A tragic accident happens where girlfriend has to receive physical therapy and she asks specifically for the mistress not thinking that this female could change her perspective on life, love, and herself.
5. Each takes away from the sessions more than what they expected.
6. Eventually girlfriend has a change of heart after seeing that her man is in love and happy because of mistress and is willing to give up her relationship to let him and this mistress get together.
Thursday, November 5, 2009
Another great book idea in the works
Ok so last night, in the middle of the night actually, I thought of another idea for a future book. The name, ‘Another woman’s man’. Now I know what you’re thinking but with the whole Alicia Keys thing, Rosci and you know who, I thought it fitting to make a book on this subject. I must have missed that memo that it was cool to get involved with another woman’s man. However I will say I’m getting it. Unfortunately I will be drawing the book from real life experiences. Let me explain, I am not involved with another woman’s man. But I am attracted to one. Will I pursue it, (the book that is) yeah. Will I pursue him, no, as long as that fine brotha stays far away from me! LOL
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